The Supremacy; by Rebecca

[pretzel]

okay, so i have very, very few complaints with this. i only saw a few grammatical errors in your writing, and i think that is was very well written and descriptive. i also really liked how you're keeping information about the island a secret from us and georgiana. and i like tara. a lot.

BUT i think that you're prologue would be more fitting as a first chapter than a prologue. in my experience, prologues tend to be vague and not give a lot of attention to important details in the story, such as names. usually the prologue is a hook intended to keep the reader going to understand what it has to do with the rest of the book. i'm not denying that your prologue wanted me to keep reading, prologues just usually aren't explained until further on in a novel. and yours is explained right away.

thats the only major issue i have. i'm interested to see what it is about this island and what will happen to georgi while she's there. keep up the good work, m'dear!

[Rebecca]

Edited!